Old man dies on hope,
Eyes gauged out, strangled silly,
All rejoice inside.
A kick in the ass,
With a football boot, no less,
The footprint stays on.
Edited version
A kick in the ass,
With a football boot, no less,
The *studmarks stay on.
Red blood on the floor,
Mystery killer around,
Smothered Gollum at the door.
Too much rage and not enough time. I will be back.
* An alternative suggestion
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ReplyDeleteA very rare glimpse of the ultra violence within.
Too many contributing factors. Better this then scolding innocent people! :)
ReplyDeletehee!hee!hee! sounds pretty aggresive.
ReplyDeleteMsUniCorn Girl
Eek! Terra, hugs, it sounds like you need some xxx
ReplyDeleteOooo rage! I can relate to that ... hehehe ... Hope things are okay though.
ReplyDeleteANGER!!!! Me likey.....
ReplyDeleteHehehe..hopefully no one provoke u to lose your temper/to manifest "the ultra violence within" ever
ReplyDeleteMy goodness! Strong emotion is good for creativity.
ReplyDeleteMore please!
MsUnicorn Girl: Nah... I'm pretty harmless. I think ;)
ReplyDeleteHoozle: Thanks... Hugs back. But what is xxx?
Nick: Yeah.. things will get ok. 5:30 pm today.
Sabrina: LOL! Yes, I'd noticed.
Jai: Hahaha... I hope so to. I only get violent verbally, though...
Travis: I think I have to agree on that one... more may come, who knows?
Sorry, Terra, that was bad punctuation. It should have read:
ReplyDelete"Eek! Terra, hugs, it sounds like you need some! xxx", with the 'xxx' representing kisses/hugs. Teehee!
LOL! Thank you for the clarification, Hoozle... :)
ReplyDeleteGood grief! Will there be a post later about what is pissing you off?
ReplyDeleteThe thought did cross my mind... :)
ReplyDeleteDon't hit me terra. I'm not out to hurt you.
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